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10/13/2018 01:24 PM 

coffin gossip.
Category: Poems

Bury me in black and red

Now that im among the dead

Hidden where the plants thrive

I didnt ask to be alive


As my coffin awaits,

No roses hold me.

This was my choice however,

Because, you see,

Red just isn’t my colour.


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mikey misery

 

Nov 13th 2018 - 4:27 AM

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Thanks for your criticism!!


Gabber

 

Nov 12th 2018 - 5:28 AM

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I like the first stanza alot, butbthe 2nd stanxa does not seem to flow as well. Hope i dont come as rude, just offering my opinion, and i reallu like the first stanza by the way

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